DarkLinkKirby's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Katana]

I loved it!

It was great! I could express more than how much I liked the idea of what you were doing. It would only be better if it were more detailed, but you only have so much you can do with 30 days of flash. You my friend need to have a full version so that we can see more great flash animations from you.

I enjoyed the music but the sound effects would over power it at times. Also, the purely whiteness thing that you had going on was great but the blood did not mix well with it. I dont think it could have been done another way but it just didnt feel right. Maybe a different red for the blood would have been better. And when the male fighter became some sort of beast it didnt make since to me as to why he didnt start like that. Dont get me wrong it was awesome but I felt it just didnt fit so well. Also when he was in this form the colors didnt match up with the background very well.

Just minor details but overall it was a great flash animation and I hope to see more from you.

ThiefCopy responds:

Yes, I agree. The thing is, I have NO idea how to adjust volume levels, so when I download a sound clip, it varies. I actually didn't use the song I wanted simply because it was far too quiet for the sound effects. I'm totally dense with those kinds of things....

That's also an interesting thing about the color. I've never been all that great at coordinating color schemes, and because this was an impulse animation I did, I actually didn't have a clue what colors I was using ahead of time.

Thanks for the long review.

[madness annihilation 1]

Not too bad for your first flash

It was way too short and the awesome face was just you trying to be funny when it really made little sense. For a madness video there was a lack of gore. But please don't be discouraged, this was great for a first flash and I didn't mean to offend you I'm just telling you what you need to improve. Just try to improve your work a bit more and make it a bit longer. Good luck.

hankjwimbleton64 responds:

yea thx ill maybe improve for the next flash and add more gore and the awesome face i didnt put it ther becuse i was trying to be funny i thought it would fit prefectly