I loved it!
It was great! I could express more than how much I liked the idea of what you were doing. It would only be better if it were more detailed, but you only have so much you can do with 30 days of flash. You my friend need to have a full version so that we can see more great flash animations from you.
I enjoyed the music but the sound effects would over power it at times. Also, the purely whiteness thing that you had going on was great but the blood did not mix well with it. I dont think it could have been done another way but it just didnt feel right. Maybe a different red for the blood would have been better. And when the male fighter became some sort of beast it didnt make since to me as to why he didnt start like that. Dont get me wrong it was awesome but I felt it just didnt fit so well. Also when he was in this form the colors didnt match up with the background very well.
Just minor details but overall it was a great flash animation and I hope to see more from you.
Yes, I agree. The thing is, I have NO idea how to adjust volume levels, so when I download a sound clip, it varies. I actually didn't use the song I wanted simply because it was far too quiet for the sound effects. I'm totally dense with those kinds of things....
That's also an interesting thing about the color. I've never been all that great at coordinating color schemes, and because this was an impulse animation I did, I actually didn't have a clue what colors I was using ahead of time.
Thanks for the long review.
I enjoyed this completely. It had a hint of a message which I loved. And the whole thing seems based off of a poem, was it? I dont know. But no matter what this video was good. It seems like something that would have been done in Star Trek or something of the sort. The voice is strikingly similar to that of Leonard Nimoys. I thank you for presenting me with such a work. I suggest that everyone on Newgrounds and in the world, to watch this video.
It made me smile...
I enjoyed the music, though it was a tad short. I did enjoy the amount of work that went into "Brook" but the other two are lacking. I also felt that this could have been much longer. And the over view of the earth looks like you got it from Google Maps or something of the sort. But I did enjoy the ending and it was overall a good animation.
It was okay. Might I suggest that when you make the full animation that you use original sprites. It just felt so unoriginal when you were using the Riku and Marluxia sprites. But I like your idea behind it and I hope to see the final version. Good luck on it!
Not too bad for your first flash
It was way too short and the awesome face was just you trying to be funny when it really made little sense. For a madness video there was a lack of gore. But please don't be discouraged, this was great for a first flash and I didn't mean to offend you I'm just telling you what you need to improve. Just try to improve your work a bit more and make it a bit longer. Good luck.
yea thx ill maybe improve for the next flash and add more gore and the awesome face i didnt put it ther becuse i was trying to be funny i thought it would fit prefectly
Lolzy but short
It was epic to say the least. I loved the old style T.V.ness of it all. And the music was great. The only thing about it is that it was a bit short and I dont think that too many people on newgrounds will lol at it unless they get the references. But all in all it was great.
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